failed to get into her heart
my heart weeps like a lonely part
everything for her i dedicated
in her life may be i didn't fitted
underperformed to get my place created
the goddess is much more than i treated
i should be the one whom she never regretted
to become the only one she always expected.
touching the heart will be my consideration
getting a place there will be my admiration
promise that i will leave that impression
that i am the only one she used to mention
my heart weeps like a lonely part
everything for her i dedicated
in her life may be i didn't fitted
underperformed to get my place created
the goddess is much more than i treated
i should be the one whom she never regretted
to become the only one she always expected.
touching the heart will be my consideration
getting a place there will be my admiration
promise that i will leave that impression
that i am the only one she used to mention
Good idea ishaan..luv ur creations..:)
ReplyDeletety veenu ... u alwaz motivate me .... back of the mind i hav ki atleast u wud be der
DeleteUr welcm ishaan..um olways der..! :)
DeleteTy veenu .... u r truly m bestest buddy .....,, u gv m so much motivation yaar ...... cant express :-)
ReplyDeletevery well written
ReplyDeletety n pls continue commenting .... your views are really important
DeleteGood1 to start wid ishan.. Especially loved d positive note u ended with, with a determination to win her back .. the closing matches d blogs title 'Power of love'.. Keep writing more.. :)
ReplyDeletety shyla ... vl surely write more
DeleteBro express your feelings to her, she should be head over heels if you are so serious abt her..And if she is not then i guess she is really missing out on life..
ReplyDeletedhawal ty bhai ... i vl express to her .... finger crossed ... continue commenting
DeleteSAY TO HER YOUR FEELINGS
ReplyDeletety.... i vl surely comment
DeleteSHYLA: ty so much .... surely vl write more
ReplyDeleteDEVIL : daval bro ty for the suppoert. may she accept me.
ReplyDelete1 of b bst litrary wrks i hv cm across... waitn 4 more f such treats..
ReplyDeletety so much for commenting ..... vl surely write more
Deleteawesm buddy.. we wan mor.........
ReplyDeletety sup ... vl surely write more
DeleteIts one of yours fine creations...loved it...god bless..
ReplyDeletety so much amrita .... continue your views ... god bless to you too
DeleteA very positive side of u can be clearly seen from this
ReplyDeleteAbhishek
ty abhi so much ...... pls continue commenting
Deletetoh sajah lena PICTURE ABHI BAKKI HAI..;)
ReplyDeletety rohit bhai ..... picture abhi baaki hai mere dost
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